You got it exactly right. There is a time and a place for the passive sentences, and there is a time for the hardier, more forceful, active sentences. And you are indeed moving forward.
*grin* I just didn't know what Tim's role was in all this. Not that it surprises me that he HAS a role. *LOL* Of COURSE he does!
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Date: 2008-07-07 01:00 am (UTC)*grin* I just didn't know what Tim's role was in all this. Not that it surprises me that he HAS a role. *LOL* Of COURSE he does!