Nits recognized. Why sure, that would make sense. Course, it was hard for me to see what was going to happen in the future before the story told itself to me, but that's an excuse for poor planning, not a reason at all.
What I like about this story is that it is certainly a learning experience. What I don't like so much is that it is certainly a learning experience.
Course, that just means I'll build the NEXT one a bit more carefully!
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Date: 2006-11-20 05:08 pm (UTC)What I like about this story is that it is certainly a learning experience. What I don't like so much is that it is certainly a learning experience.
Course, that just means I'll build the NEXT one a bit more carefully!