Honey bunny, can I wait till it's over to re-examine and re-write? I don't disagree with what you've said. I pictured it more like a Cary Grant sort of thing, but I can see your point. What is it that would cause them to be disarmed at such a quick notice? Is it the giddiness of being together? Not likely. What it tells me is I need to examine this portion in more detail ONCE the end of the month has been reached. Then you and I will discuss a whole lot and see what can be done to make this a winningly credible part. How does that sound? Right now, it's a race for words, rather than substance. Substance can come later.
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Date: 2006-11-13 01:37 am (UTC)