Yes, the punctuation around the onomatopoeica should be there, but I was writing!! I was working to get a bit of a story down and create a character sort of thing. This isn't even a story yet. Just an embryonic bit of a story.
The question popped into my head of what I would do if I got a "Get out of free Jail" card in the mail. No return address. Nothing else in the envelope. It was such an idea, I had to write it down. The character in the story has even defined himself to me yet, but of course, it's an aspect of me.
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Date: 2009-04-07 04:00 pm (UTC)Yes, the punctuation around the onomatopoeica should be there, but I was writing!! I was working to get a bit of a story down and create a character sort of thing. This isn't even a story yet. Just an embryonic bit of a story.
The question popped into my head of what I would do if I got a "Get out of free Jail" card in the mail. No return address. Nothing else in the envelope. It was such an idea, I had to write it down. The character in the story has even defined himself to me yet, but of course, it's an aspect of me.
I do have an idea of where it might lead....
Love ya sis!