Capi, darlin, I take just a little time to fix spelling and stuff. When I paste it into LJ, it does that underlining thing to show me very Obvious things, which is good, because I don't want to look totally illlerate. I fix what is obvious, and then put it back into the soft copy I'm writing.

Now, what I don't take much time to do is go back and add a lot of description, fix stupid grammar mistakes, things like that. I'll do that once the story is finished, probably early December, if not before.

The thing with "bring it" is that my character, up to that point, is NOT wanting to fight, at all. His normal response to the fight or flight is to flight. It's hard to hit a target that isn't there. Of course, things change....