Awww.. thanks, Capi. In contemplation, there are some small details I want to add when I go back for the re-write... and this one will have a re-write. I want to add more to Angelina's reactions to things, because I think she needs it. I need to define her character a bit more. I now have a place where the story is headed, I got an inkling of the end, so I need to direct her more towards the logical character development that she'll have to have to be able to do what she needs to do. Besides, she's way to quiet.

Fifty isn't old, but there are times when I feel so much more than fifty. It happens. I get odd aches and pains and things that happen that I have no explanation for except that I'm getting older. Fifty isnn't old, but sometimes there is most assuredly a bit of treadwear that shows through.