Someone wrote in [personal profile] joegoda 2006-11-20 04:44 pm (UTC)

Morning ))Hugs(( back, Whetstone! Good point, specially bout the last one. Granted, no where in the story so far has kaylee brought up laura's past. At this point, I don't see a reason for her too.

At the airport, it was referred in a reply from Sarah that Kaylee was expecting them, but that was eons ago.

Doesn't matter if it's critique or not, darlin' If a points valid, it's valid. Only a fool would argue against a valid point. (Lawyers and politicians, of course)

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