http://shackrlu.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shackrlu.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] joegoda 2006-11-12 09:09 pm (UTC)

And now..... to work!

""I've retired now, Laura." Wells scratched the back of her hand with his index finger." *blink blink* What an *odd* gesture. Not exactly.... um..... gentle, caring, loving...... more.... *prickly*. What are you after here?


I'll tell you what I saw in my minds eye when I read this. Since the paragraph before had described them as holding hands. and then, "fingers still entwined." *I* saw them sitting at a table acroos from each other their hands on top of the table fingers laced together. Not in a side by side hand hold but imagine reaching across a table and entwining your fingers with someone across from you. Then the finger motion in my minds eye was more of a rub than an actual scratch, no finger nails, just pad of the finger.. Boy it is hard to descibe what I saw in my head. LOL Carry on, just my 2 cents.

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